Very nice beat
I LOVED the beat, couldn't stop listenin to it, and the overall sound of the lyrics was good. However, I think it is noticeable that you are not a hip-hop rapper. The lyrical content and rythym of the rapping just does not sound like the tracks you hear in the top 40, but I wouldn't say you too were far off. Overall, I thought it was great man. Keep it up!